May 7, 2017 admin 129Comment
 “Hi! You seem to be an avid book reader?” the boy said looking at this sweet girl in Rajdhani express.
   They both were travelling from Delhi to Jaipur. Boy was a 30-year-old bachelor who was going there to attend a marriage function. The girl was a 23-year-old babe, out on vacations to meet her cousins. Big boots, a crop top, rugged jeans & a little lip gloss was what she wore. She saw tilting her book at an angle just enough to look at the face from where the question bomb came.
   “Yes!” she answered with an uninterested smile & got back to reading.
   “I have read only Alchemist & one of Chetan Bhagat’s book in fiction,” the boy said trying to continue the conversation. Former name of the book will impress her, he thought.
   “Okay,” she said trying to behave politely. She stole a quick gaze from the side of her eyes. A white-collar tee, green colour jeans with woodland shoes​ was all she could fathom in her short-lived look. He looked decent to her. Nonetheless, she started reading again.
  After a while she cut a glance at him again, and his eyes were still on her. She bit her tongue trying to hide her face behind the book.
She decided to initiate the conversation this time. After all, boys do not have the monopoly over starting conversations, she thought.
   “Very different genres?” she said keeping the book down.
   “Umm. I think so. Actually, I am more of a non-fiction kinda guy. I like reading self help books more. Basically, more career oriented ones.”
   “That’s what most of the boys are, career oriented. Huh!” she sighed.
   “You can say.”
   His voice was low, smoky & sexy for her. She looked out of the window trying to flee away in her fairy tale world before he pulled her out from there to chit chat again.
   Both of them were seated on the window seats with no other companion on their berths. Their rendezvous which started from a book went to almost all of the topics which a girl likes. The boy was smart enough to identify topics of her interest. Seems, the self-help books were helping him here.
After a marathon of conversations, the girl shared her love life & the problem she was facing in it. It was then that the train stopped at a station. He went outside to bring something to eat. He asked her as well, she denied politely.
 “Ok beautiful.” She blushed hearing.

   Coming back & jumping at his seat again, he shooted, “You know, why do most of the problems arise between two people?” he said while munching the samosa he bought from the station.
   “You tell handsome,” she murmured the first two words, third one was in her mind. Her hand was now on her chin supporting her face.
   Yeah, that’s what I really want to know. Ten points for knowing what I was thinking, she further thought.
   “Umm. Let me tell you this with a story.”
   The girl sat straight hearing the word ‘story’. She looked straight into his eyes. The boy began..
   “A man was sitting on a bench at a railway station with three kids. The kids would have seen between four to six summers. They were constantly running from here to there, throwing popcorns at each other. The father was just sitting at the bench, doing nothing. The kids were naughty enough to create humdrum at the platform. One of the kids even fell down on a couple sitting there. Looking at this, an aged woman came near the man & gave him a good hard look telling him to take hold of his kids.”
   He paused for a moment and continued, “Tears started trickling down his cheeks. The man coming back from his stupor apologized to her & explained his situation. He was coming back from the funeral of his wife.”
   “Holy Shit!” she almost shouted in her Oh-My-God moment. Some of the passengers turned towards her. Biting her tongue, she said softly, “Sad.”
   “Hmm. Sometimes we ruin things by not trying to understand the other person and expecting over the top. It’s like food is always yummier when it’s on someone else’s plate. Things seem easy when we are not the ones dealing with them.”
   “Ya, Ya. Like our mothers keep on saying- You will come to know when you will become a mother. Something like that, right?”
   “Smart girl.”
   “That’s what I am darling. A.. I mean Mr. But tell me, if I wouldn’t have expectations of love and care from my boyfriend, then whom to expect it from? Tom Cruise?” she chuckled saying.
   “You can always opt for a better boyfriend in that case,” he smiled pointing towards himself.
   “Ahan. Let’s not deviate from the topic.” Really men are so focussed that they can even clear IIT exams of flirting, she grinned thinking.
   “Nope sweetheart. I..I mean, Miss.” Boys can also act flirty sweetheart, he thought and continued making a serious face this time.
   “Of course, we must have it from the one who we are in relationship with. See, life is like an amazing roller coaster ride. Either we can shout lamenting or we can enjoy all the bumpiness, twists and turns which it has to offer. And on this roller coaster journey, wisdom is not to see the picture from one side only. But it is to know the other side’s story as well before judging. It is to wear the other person’s pair of glasses also sometimes and then act accordingly.” He exchanged their goggles, putting her goggle on his eye soon enough to re-exchange them smilingly.
   “And I am not taking anyone’s side. I hope you are getting my point,” he grinned shrugging, trying to be as soft as he can to convey the philosophy he believes in.
   “I mean, I haven’t graduated from university of how-to-understand-humans. But still. And, right now you are sitting in front of me, so I am telling from your perspective. Same principle applies to your beloved, stunningly handsome, intelligent dude as well.” He winked.
 “He too must understand you & your expectations. I hope you are not finding it stodgy?” He enquired showing his crossed fingers. She was looking at him with blank expressions, trying to grasp what he was saying. A soothing silence prevailed.

   The boy & the girl started looking outside from the clean glass window. It was dawn & the sky was filled with birds, the view of the passing fields having lots of yellow flowers in it was mesmerizing. At the moment, she felt there were only they two in the whole train. She- the beautiful and he- the philosopher.
   She looked at him, he looked back at her. She smiled, he asked her flickering his eyebrows, “What?”
   “Thank you. Friends?” She forwarded her hand towards him.
 He laughed at the pout she gave him, slapped at her hand softly, swishing his hips next to her, placed his hand on her shoulder kissing her hand, “Friends ki bachchi.” She gave a peck on his cheek. They were madly into each other from the past 4 years, going together to Jaipur to have some alone time apart from their other activities they were supposed to attend. Playing the game of role plays was their favorite past time.

   The aged man on the other seat was enjoying their conversation since long now. Seeing this he thought with his mouth & eyes wide open, “O Lord, save me from today’s Fast Food generation.”

129 thoughts on “STRANGERS IN A TRAIN- A short story with some amazing-life nuggets!

      1. This is superb😍👍🎈✔
        I am sad that i could not found the link before😬Kuddos to you!!
        Waiting for more of them💛

        1. Am glad you found it now, & also that you liked it Riddhi. Thank you for encouraging. Keep reading. 🙂

  1. Aaaahhhhh…. i Love dis short story.
    Wanna read it again and again.
    Awesome work done. Keep it up 😊

    1. Aww.. Happy to read that from one of my very first reader of this story, I mean even before of it’s publishing. 🙂

  2. In Love with ur story sir…….a tale inclusive of sheer grace😊😘plss keep the good work going……waiting eagerly for next one……😉😉

  3. Fantabulous story I must say!
    Maamu, you’re an awesome writer.
    “They were madly into each other from the past 4 years”, this line LITERALLY bought a smile on my face😅
    Hats off!
    When can I come for an Autograph?? 😀

    1. Thanks a tonne Himanshu, happy to read your comment. Drop in to Mhow with Di sometime. Keep reading. 🙂

    1. Thank you for being the inspiration behind the girl in the story Shreshtha. Happy to see that finally you liked the language. 🙂

  4. Really loved this story Rohit. I thought you were only good at writing quote which have twists at the end. But this is is fantastically written by you. I’m eager to read many more. All the best, Rohit. 🙂

    Best wishes,
    SumitOfficial

    1. Thanks a lot Deepali, means a lot coming from you. BTW that’s my favorite love story of all times. 🙂

  5. The people sitting beside them would surely be puzzled as the aged man felt. Nicely articulated and thoroughly enjoyed. Good work, pal.

  6. Sarkaar…
    Before reading​ I assumed it to be like Sir Alfred Hitchcock’s Strangers on A Train.
    But this was totally a different genre. But liked it. 👍

  7. Nice story. Should be read alone. The story helps to visualize the story in one’s own mind. Good effort by rohit.
    Hope to read such nice ones in further.
    All the best

  8. Again…. Mind-blowing story created….
    The USP of ur story is ur characterization & flow….
    Really welcrafted….
    Good luck…

  9. Simply amazing sir… Really wanna know about the love story… Title is really awesome!!!! Waiting for the next one😊

  10. Story was gud but turning is beyond expectations and atlast that aged man’s word 😂😂 keep going brother

  11. Sweet story, nicely written. At first, I thought that how a girl could befriend a strange boy on a train journey and tell him everything about her. But the end of the story gave me my answer. That is why it is said, don’t judge a book by its cover.

  12. When it is about books, interest comes automatically… Great story… N the idea of roleplaying….Damn.. 💗 liked it…. Very beautifully penned…. Reading the story in the romantic rain, made me smile even wider…
    Great work ..Keep it up sir..😊

  13. Its really Amazing Rohit Ji…

    What an awesome passtime trick you have mentioned by your story.
    Keep writing such type of short stories.
    But I’m waiting for long one.
    🙂 🙂
    ….

  14. That’s it?? I just didn’t want this to end. I enjoyed reading it so much.. I was smiling and that was enough to make me realise that if this was the whole novel I could read it in a day.. This was out of the world and the ending was great.. this was my kinda love story.. Thanq for this piece..

  15. one,the title acts as a bait.Two,you put everything so straight yet zigzaged.Three,it was love to read. good work .

  16. Rohit u r just awesome….your the one redefining love of ages …great I loved …past four years…awww I loved it.

  17. Always exciting to read a story that has a railway journey…
    Right up to expectations sir…
    Very well written..
    Looking forward for this good stuff from you..
    ✌✌

  18. Lovely! Your stories are so close to life. They always have a hidden moral to learn from.

    Loved the part when he says, He too must understand you and your expectations. 👍🏻

  19. Loved It yet again Rohit!! Had those two been a couple, would have been glad 🙂 But still a good one Rohit ji. 🙂 Bravo!

  20. Loved the story Sir… the story is full of reality,imagination and love😍 …..Waiting for your next one.

  21. Sir it was just awesome with something that i felt i was myself that guy on the train and it made me feel so realistically fantastic. Keep it up waiting for your novel .

  22. This one is fab… and now my favourite… “Friend ki bacchi” just unfolded everything… liked dar role playing thing… 😁 .. great work sir… looking forward to more of dese…

  23. Awesome.. But short..I know, I know its a short story. Please write your book now, I wanna keep reading.
    Also, your narration is fantastic.

  24. Reading this seems that u will be one of my favorite author …..hope u will finish writing ur book soon .thank you

  25. Awesome sir…..Its really wonderful story….we all are waiting for more stories like this.. With love A fan of urs….:)

  26. Very sweet! I enjoyed it truly. Reminded me of those ‘Mills and Boon’ romantic books we used to read when in school. The only thing that disturbed the smooth flow of the tale, was the disturbing ‘&’… do you always use this short form? I somehow prefer the full word ‘and’ .
    Anyway, that’s a wee bit. Superb write otherwise. Congratulations.

  27. Thanks a tonne, Nimaji for your genuine feedback. Nope, I don’t use it (short form of ‘and’) now (as this one is my very first written short story. Didn’t know then.) Thanks again. Keep reading, keep writing 🙂

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  29. Osm one wid a gr8 twist …..ya its really a fast food generation 😂…some funny things should be there in a relationship to keep it more refreshingly….osm one ………indeed!!👍👍💞💞

  30. Wow such a sweet story!!!😍😘
    I loved it I am expecting many more such stories from you Sir.
    Beautifully ✍ written.

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